The Crossing

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The Crossing

Postby Fox » 11 Jun 2012, 09:33

Moon
Fragrant
Greenish yellow
On black velvet
A river stone
Leap onto it
Hold your balance
Don’t slip
Here jump to me
I’m waiting
For you to cross
The void
To be my friend again
Do it
Please
Take a cosmic risk
It’ll be worth it
I promise
"When liberty comes with hands dabbled in blood it is hard to shake hands with her." Wilde

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"a man's position here is not ruled so much by what he can earn as by what he can owe and still remain at large." Letters of a Shanghai Griffin

"It's called the American dream because you have to be asleep to believe it." George Carlin

The American oligarchy spares no pains in promoting the belief that it does not exist, but the success of its disappearing act depends on equally strenuous efforts on the part of an American public anxious to believe in egalitarian fictions and unwilling to see what is hidden in plain sight.
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Re: The Crossing

Postby Super Hans » 11 Jun 2012, 17:51

Nice.
Not bad.
The bones got the wrong detail I hoped it would have for you
Safe for a shin bone or even a hand
It's such a lonely ride...
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Re: The Crossing

Postby Steviebike » 11 Jun 2012, 20:06

The enigmatic title drew me to this post...

I was not disappointed on the enigma front.
Just checking but you're a South African Engrish Teachur right? No. I'm a Russian nuclear physicist.
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Re: The Crossing

Postby Fox » 13 Jun 2012, 06:12

Steviebike wrote:The enigmatic title drew me to this post...

I was not disappointed on the enigma front.
Super Hans wrote:Nice.
Not bad.



Thanks boys.
"When liberty comes with hands dabbled in blood it is hard to shake hands with her." Wilde

"I don't know where the sun beams end and the star light begins. It's all a mystery." Flaming Lips

"a man's position here is not ruled so much by what he can earn as by what he can owe and still remain at large." Letters of a Shanghai Griffin

"It's called the American dream because you have to be asleep to believe it." George Carlin

The American oligarchy spares no pains in promoting the belief that it does not exist, but the success of its disappearing act depends on equally strenuous efforts on the part of an American public anxious to believe in egalitarian fictions and unwilling to see what is hidden in plain sight.
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